My room is not big, it is very simple and clean. When you enter through the door, to your right way, you can see a dresser. There are a lots of stuffs on it. Such as, Body wash,
Facial cleanser,shampoo,wax and cream. There is some coins on it,too. Beside dresser, you could see table and bookshelf on the table. On the bookshelf,placed many books of ESL and a thick dictionary. Under the bookshelf, there is a MacBook on the table. In front of your eye, there are open windows. Fresh air into the room through the window. To your left way, you can see a closet and many clothes and jeans in it. There are two big trunks, that comes from china, on the floor. In front of trunks, that is my favourite, there is a comfortable bed, and I need it everyday. In short, that is a neat and warm room.
Lawrence, I really like this clearly written description of your room. Your organized your paragraph very well.
ReplyDeleteCHECK: Singular and plural problems.
- There IS A LOT OF STUFF..(non-count noun- always singular)
- In front of your EYES
-There are two big trunks that COME FROM...
Remember to always use a captital letter for the name of a country = China