Thursday, January 20, 2011
Basketball
Basketball, which is a good sport for everyone and popular all over the world. Why is it popular and a lot of people like it? I think that there are three reasons. Fist, basketball is good for healthy. when you play it,you must move, shot and jump. you must full of energy all the time. So your body get a good exercise. Second, basketball is good for you to communicate with other basketball players. you don't have enough time to tell your teammate how to play in game, you only use your body language and eyes. After long time, you and your friends improve your friendship. Last, basketball is good for you to control your emotions because there are lots of body collisions when you are playing basketball: therefore, you should keep your mind and cool head to play and win. In short, Basketball is good for your healthy, to communicate with other players and control your emotions. I hope everyone learn it and love it like me.
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Lawrence,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well organized text. You expressed yourself clearly in English. Great start!
CHECK; first sentence. Take out the word 'which'. Only use the which phrase if you put a comma after and continue the sentence.
Basketball, which......... all over the world, is my favourite sport.
CHECk: IN the game.
I think I have read this text before. You need to write new texts this semester for your blog, please.
Yes it's true lawrence!! Basketball is a very good sport!!:)I think that it's also good for the self-confidence because you need to believe in your self to show your potential!
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